Inside a melody stricken heart
Scorched by the wantonness
Some bury it with a formal clay
Some burn it with an unspoken confess
Without an organic dissection
This evolution remains like a chasm
Like a thought devoid of dimension
That speaks of obscene sarcasm
Using a black scalpel of rectitude
The fundamental rights are molested
Like robbing from a homicidal prostitute
A transaction where no emotions are invested
Realizations are gang raped by pride
Ego squanders the humility of truth
This divided earth is a stripping bride
Setting the impotence of mind on a cruise
Injecting a venom of lies
Self deception creates the polarities
Love is catharsis disguised
Our individuality is our mural iniquities
Hope is the best selling fiction
Fairy tales narrated by fairy who are sluts
This consciousness stands in conviction
Judgments comes from all corners with eyes tightly shut
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It's dark, alright.. Maybe a bit too dark for me. But I love the way you've woven the words into this steady flow of emotions.
ReplyDeleteIf there was no hope, the world would have been another place altogether :)
And yayy I am your first follower :P
I thought it is less dark than the previous one. I am actually trying my hands on creating the darkest and most immoral poem one by one. They may or may not depict reality however they must have the basic evil ingredients. :P
ReplyDeleteT%hanks for being my first follower. And the world without hope is kinda like some paradox. Without hope , one may do whats needed and let the life do the rest. You know its like when you dont expect something from somebody , chances of getting hurt in the future substantially decreases. Although when we hope things to turn up well , it acts as a motivating factor for us to do whats right. So here lies the paradox.
I got it better now sir :D
ReplyDeletewell..well..well!!
ReplyDeletein the first shot that i read this n now again when i read this...the few lines that were destined for me stood out:
- Realizations are gang raped by pride
- Hope is the best selling fiction
- Judgments comes from all corners with eyes tightly shut
this one isnt so dark..this could very well be 1 of ur backyard stains :P
i love the font in the header image..i hate those skulls :)
Thanks for your reading and for liking the header font. I never thought anyone can actually relate themselves to this dark poem but somehow interconnectedness of our lives have more than apparent ways that meets the eye.
ReplyDeleteAnd why do you hate skulls vins ?? They are so cute :P